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I find it lovely that people now write poetry tributes to teen fiction. The positive thing is that your poem is probably on par if not better than the whole ...

The difference between good poetry and cathartic poetry is that in order to write good poetry you need to write in order to make OTHER people feel something. We as ...

I wouldn't call this a poem, more an advertiesment. But in keeping with that, it is a simple, accessible method of getting a simple, accessible message across to a simple, ...

I loved the chaos in this. It was just raw thoughts, flashing in and out of the background in random places until some nightmarishly psychedelic images appeared and suddenly there's ...

Hai. Not a constructive review as such, because as you said, I don't want to wreck your coffee :-), but I just wanna say that I enjoyed and appreciate this. ...

We can pass for undersized cynics in pants but naked, oh, naked we are such children I can't meet your eyes. (I think you could use a break after children: ...

Chill, Galerius. Lol. I liked this Juniper, the message was good and the imagery was even better :-).. The only thing holding this back was your rather strict adherance to ...

Wow. Cleverr. Its almost minimalism, but obviously a bit long. I think that because of this: the poem being so postmodern- alpha-conceptual and all, it is flawed by its length. ...

I liked it, concise but it worked. Up to the capitalised line it got the message across well, good imagery, word choice. You built up a nice 'vortex effect: being ...

Yeah, love your work old man. Lol. I am terribly sorry for such a useless review, but I honestly cannot find anything to change here: I cannot touch your imagery, ...

Just a quick one- I'm afraid I won't be much help. Well... you beat the cliche: as soon as I saw the title I was worried, but you definitely surpassed ...

Welcome to YWS mate, First of all... I loved the poem. I like your style, its so precise with the imagery :-) Nothing much really constructive to say, I loved ...

I loved it, and your right: it is very prufrock-esque... (lovesong is possibly my favourite poem :-) Wonderful imagery, and even the way it is written adds to the idea ...

Haii I read the first two stanzas before I noticed what was going on... (I had no idea what a sestina is) so that is impressive in itself.. to carry ...

This wasn't sex. This wasn't love. This sure as hell wasn't romantic. And why was there a vampire?? You didn't make it sound like a vampire.. it was like you ...