- Re: Life and Death Sep 5, 2014
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Re: My Favourite Things: Fandom Style
LOvE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! You love PercyJackson, right? I do too. I am fangirling!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Save Me
Great! However, an error. Here, I think there should be a subject. "They are enveloping like the night" How about "me" after "enveloping"? That will be all. I just might ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: No More Death
Okay, grim. Amazing. Lack of punctuation. Here, you need an apostrophe. As do in another part of this. "And I dont want to go" That will be all, my friend. ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Dear Daddy
Beautifully written! I loved this, and Happy Review Day! First, I'm just telling you numbers are usually written out in books. Therefore, "7" should be "seven". "I will be turning ...
Sep 5, 2014 -
Re: Bullets
Oh. Well, your welcome!
Jul 26, 2014 -
Re: Hey Sally
Your welcome!
Jul 26, 2014 -
Re: Hey Sally
Hey, wisegirl22 here for reviewing! I think the rhyme scheme is a bit differing in the beginning stanza and the next. See, it is ABCD, but the rest is ABCB. ...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: Hey Sally
Hiya!
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: Really
ARE YOU HAPPY didn't really say normal to me, I thought it looked weird. You welcome!
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: Cave
Oh. *blush* Well, okay, if you say so...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: You
Ya, I am wise. Though I got the name from Percy Jackson. Your welcs!
Jul 24, 2014 -
Re: An Essay on Society (from the perspective of a cat)
Okay, I really like this. My only error to give to you: I don't understand this. I know this is supposed to be humor, but I really don't think this ...
Jul 24, 2014 -
Re: Going through Time-Chapter Seven: We're Dying in Two Ways
Never mind, I edited. :)
Jul 24, 2014 -
Re: Going through Time-Chapter Seven: We're Dying in Two Ways
Thanks, I'll edit. I still don't get what's wrong with much of it though...
Jul 24, 2014