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This is amazing! I myself am self-described a rebel. I like the color orange. My mind definitely needs to go through the MOM machine--the Mechanic Obliterator of Messes. I also ...

One review tip: make them less enthusiastic. Those exclamation marks were way too many. :D Thx!

:D

thx! You know, I have a friend of mine. She's a Percy Jackson fan too and loves writing fanfictions-just recently started one.

Thanks. I already mentioned this to the people below me, but I like to think of the discarded lines and all in all wacky things in my poem as shards ...

Thanks for the review! I do have to writing sucks.

Okay, first off I'd like to reply. (Obviously.) I never actually thought about this until right now, but the choppy sentences kind of symbolize the shards of broken glass--they're not ...

LOL thx.

Fine lol I have a nasty temper.

Haha, no reviews are bad. If you think so, though, it's fine. However, I kind of based this off of a brokenhearted girl. I'm sorry I don't speak too much ...

LOL okay.

Thx!

Thank you! And yes I am nine turned nine ummmm...eight months ago.

GUYS STOP IT I AM GETTing ANNOYED I never capitalize my sentences and don't bother because I feel like it.

Wow. Youre the first one who actually tried to comprehend it...