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Okay, bulletproof, let's see what you did wrong. Sorry if I'm a bit harsh. :| What is the deal with the lack of capitalization? Please capitalize the sentences. And in ...

Haha...just a few issues, Messenger. I advise you to put this into song writing format, maybe add in the right parts and edit this a little longer, just keep it ...

PrateekSonny, nice to meet you, wisegirl22 at your service. *bows humbly* In the beginning, you should watch out for little errors. Put a space after "30". "In my almost 30year ...

Percy Jackson for the winnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, according to Rick Riordan, people who are demigods have dyslexia, not perfect grades and scores. "What are you, a robot? Look at your repor

KatyaElefant, I think I've met and followed you. Out of pure randomness, I will post something on your wall and follow you. I think you can do a little more ...

SportyWriter, I read your piece 5 Ways to get into the Literary Spotlight. My only error to point out was that the time, "7.00" was supposed to be 7:00. And ...

Hello, Percybeth, join the Logan Lerman Club and follow me! This poem was really emotional, and that is a good thing. When people get depressed, it's not like they cry ...

Pinkieishere1345, thanks for the review! I understand this is a common mistake. But, "Let yourself sing along as your spirit are inside..." this does not make sense. The ending was ...

Hello, magpie, wisegirl22, I believe we've met. There wasn't anything to point out, the vocabulary was beautiful, the point was sharp, and you really hit your target. I think you ...

Hello, jazzydracula! Wisegirl22 here for reviews. According to the Harry Potter series, it is the hat who sings the song, not Gryffindor. "While you and the other first years are ...

Hello, FearlessLove4, my name is wisegirl22, Reader of the Century. I am here to discuss praise with you. I believe this work was a song, yes? It had a chorus. ...

Sleepette, I don't believe we've met, have we? Wisegirl22 here for the most amazing review ever. Happy Awesome Day! Despite your chefly efforts, I think there should be colons after ...

Hey, Samus, my old friend! I look forward to future donations! :D Let's start with the beginning. One main problem I see with writers is punctuation. Something stood out to ...

Heya, Avalon! Is your avatar Pokemon themed? I loved this, but in the second sentence, I think it was a bit run-on. But a period before "she" and after "sky". ...

Hey, Dragongirl! Wisegirl22, here for review day. I know the whole Pokemon themed review day is over and all that, but I said it just for fun. I'm still maniacally ...