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hi deadmente11n0tales! i love the quiet space of this poem, and all of the beautiful nature/indoors imagery. it's really interesting how you space out suspended & echo. and also how ...

hello 5670! firstly, i love the repetition you keep throughout the poem. it creates this sense of trying to explain something to someone, telling them that you are something beautiful ...

hello themythmaster! i love the way this starts off feeling like frolicking in a field of daisies, the bright beginning with the sparrow, and the gold gleaming sun, but the ...

hello ley! this poem is such a home run for me. the way you describe becoming older & the burdens tied to it is so stunningly beautiful. i love the ...

hi dissonance! i did review this (poorly) so i'm coming back to redo this. there is something so haunting about the way you all described staying with someone- "frozen in ...

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