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Night owl took all the nitpicks for me; thank you night owl! So I'll work on the other stuff. Your placement of the dream was a little weird; it might ...

The problem with nonfiction poetry that really speaks to people (especially people like me) is that no one wants to review it for fear of sounding scornful of your misery... ...

That is why you don't provoke people with reasonable questions... Poor Barry; it must suck to not be able to suppress your feelings; to feel powerless to an emotion; to ...

Okay, that was a really good story. I assume this was the one you wanted me to review? Novel in action/ adventure? Great job. You have a lot of info ...

I didn't read chapter one, so sorry, but I thoroughly enjoyed this one! Reading Harry Potter fanfic makes me happy, for some reason. Though I understand what the point of ...

Wow. That was mucho creative! Especially the creation of new characters. I don't even like twilight and I loved your story. Especially the freaky birthing-hospital. I wouldn't mind a little ...

I remember you. Random guestbook-signing person. Ok; I really liked it! It had a lot of dialogue, which was kind of needed in this situation. I liked the Different Denny's; ...

Why does this have only two stars?? You need to get more people to review your writing. I like this a LOT more than your other story. So... six platinum ...

So much that he tells me secrets he doesn’t share with anyone else. He tells me secrets he would never share with anyone else. Other than that, good job! I ...

This was really good! It felt a little sad and nostalgic. I like the POV here-- how you jumped into the person's head right before the old woman spoke to ...

SNAP! I wrote like the world's longest review and then my Internet shut down. But I'll summarize it for you 1) I like your story-- very polished 2) It's a ...

Hello; I suppose I should remind you of the two to one ratio... but I won't. I liked you letter. One one hand, I can see how the interesting fonts ...

I saw this story posted as romantic fiction and thought "Oh goody! Something easy and uplifting!" Oh well. That was really good. I like the fact that you're a female ...

I did read your preview; It was pretty intriguing. This was even more so; though I don't quite understand where the story's going from here. A strange accident renders him ...

I have now pinned down what it is about this character that forces her to seem sometimes completely geniune; sometimes horribly fabricated. She's mannish. Also known as an Amazon. Now; ...