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Napal, you are an evil genius :smt001 Emphasis on the evil But I kind of agree with Galerius. I don't want to like this poem but I do, it's original ...

I love this idea. I watched the musical of Dr. Jeckyll and mister hide, and in that Doctor J talks to his alter ego often. They had him sit in ...

i loved this piece. but i love everything you write, so why does that surprise me? I didn't think it was all to complicated. I honed in on nicotine, asphyxiation, ...

I loved your poem, really whimsical while still feeling meaningful, sad and joyous all at once. :D Then spiders told me to tap-dance, to lightly, slightly tap-dance, right then and ...

I like this part more than the last one. No grammar nitpicks as far as I can tell; and I like the way the story's paced; though I'm not quite ...

Hello death, You kind of skipped between punctuation and none; if you're not going to use any, that's fine. Just be consistent with your choice. What will it hurt its ...

I kind of agree with the person above me. Also, because I am a wholly conceited person, I never feel extreme guilt or unworthiness when receiving a gift from anyone. ...

Personally, I hate the twilight series. But agree with you on Kirsten's acting (is that her name?) she did a good job in Adventureland but she played an angsty, moody ...

I too thought the razor blades slightly absurd, but they were hilarious as well, and I wouldn't get rid of them except for the fact that they'd be obvious to ...

I love how you incorporated a story into this piece. Smoke drapes and curls in the cat eyed sky That was exceptional; a really great beginning that got me hooked. ...

God that was beautiful. The first two lines punched me in the face; and the poem got progressively better as it moved along. Brava. A few nitty-nitpicks. Leaving the profound ...

The ending was a little confusing to me; you begged him and then hung up on him and smiled because his lies will no longer affect you? I didn't really ...

I agree with person above me. The first stanza seems to contradict the rest of the poem. In the beginning you ask him how he can be so happy; at ...

Another wonderful poem by you, Kryollac. :smt001 I’ve never fallen for your tricks; Your machinations, I’ve always seen through; For when it comes to using folk, I’m far better at ...

Welcome to yws! Nice to meet you, Hoodie girl. I agree with careless here. Jeans, a t-shirt normal appearance, but hurting inside, waiting for life to turn around; it doesn't ...