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Re: Angels and Vampires-Part 5
a few things first: im honored! thank you so much for the PM you sent me! It makes me so happy to know that someone on here thinks so highly ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Rain
That was a great poem. Its got good flow and Thank you so much for using Punctuation marks! :) (you have no idea how much it bothers me when people ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: Go Away
wow that was a very amazing and heartfelt poem. Here are a few suggestions on the punctuation to make it flow better. That you can’t take back . My hearts ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: The Looking Glass
This is great! i love the the wording. its great that it turns around inthe end. You should add sme commas and periods to make it flow better. but other ...
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Fading Into Reality
I LUV THIS POEM KATZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DONT LISTEN TO THOSE PEOPLE THIS IS UR TYPE OF POETRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :elephant: :thud: :xd: :smt005 :smt004 :smt003 :smt002 :mrg
Dec 16, 2009 -
Re: For You
ollie, that was beautiful! i almost cried, no joke! there were some parts tht could have been reworded heres some feedback (you dont really have 2 listen 2 me if ...
Dec 14, 2009