emjayc

This is a great song and I wish i could hear the rhythm that goes along to it so I could read it correctly. I agree with the others that ...

I really feel that this is not so much a poem as it is a narrative. It would be better written in story form than poetic because as a poem ...

Hello, my name is emjay and I’m going to review your story :) I’ll make comments as I read: ~The opening of this story is not very interesting (I mean ...

I was going to say, this seems more like a story than a poem. It doesn't really flow like a poem should. It's a nice concept and I like the ...

Hello, I’m emjay and I’m here to review your story :) I shall make comments as I read: ~ “Seclusion is the safest thing she could think of, but it ...

Hello! Emjay here to read your wonderful story :) I feel as if this starts as a journal entry, so it must be a narrative and when I look above ...

I enjoyed the dark comedy in this piece. It’s a perfect choice of tone and it flows well with your writing :D You cracked me up with the descriptions of ...

Wow, this is disturbing, although I know that was the point. I actually liked it…I don’t know if that’s good or not! It was just interesting. Your character is so ...

This is beautifully written :) I can already tell that I am going to enjoy reading your piece. There are just a few comments I’d like to make: ~”his father’s ...

I really like how you open this story. It’s a good attention getter. As I continue to read I am getting a humorous feeling from your narrator’s tone. It’s funny ...

Was it a rule that the story had to very short? I like this a lot and you managed to convey a lot of emotion and time into this one ...

This is a very powerful, emotional poem. You describe so many detrimental, real problems people face today. You have a beautiful choice of language that sparks my attention as I ...

This is beautiful :) You have great diction and I can almost feel the emotions from your characters. I really like the first paragraph. My favourite line is: "It was ...

I was excited to see you had posted the continuation of your story :) I won't get nitpicky about your grammar because, although there are mistakes, I'm sure you will ...

It impresses me that you wrote all your dreams down during an entire month and remembered them so vividly. I've tried recording my dreams and I can scarcely remember the ...