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First off, that was the most bizarre dream ever! Secondly, the whole Ms. Reese thing is creeping me out. Is her cuddling obsession supposed to come off as sexual? Because ...

Hello again, emjay here to review your second chapter! I have noticed many grammatical errors; there are too many for me too list here and most of them are minor. ...

I really enjoyed reading this! I love your character names, Daigo and Cecilia. Honestly, I love everything and I am not the type to nit pick, so I am not ...

I haven't read the chapters before this one, so this is going to be difficult for me to review, honestly. Also, I have to go somewhere soon so I am ...

I was stumbling in the depths of the Green Room and I found this! Since I have no read the first six chapters I had no idea what to expect. ...

Hello, this marvelous chapter was hidden at the bottom of the Green Room! I have to say, I had no idea what to expect because I rarely read science fiction, ...

I enjoyed reading this. You have an excellent handle on diction and your grammar is perfect. So far you have an interesting plot and have ended this chapter in a ...

Hello, katiekatt! I'm emjay here to review your short piece :) Also, welcome to YWS!! This is a great writing community. I will review as I read it over again: ...

I liked this a lot. You have excellent diction/word choice. My favourite part is how you used the little bits of lyrics to slow down the piece. I found a ...

Alright, this will be the one thing I review tonight since I read it earlier and thought it was good. I'm not going to dwell on grammar because I read ...

I really wish these were actual instructions on how humans could fly. I appreciate the thought though ^^ I love the theme of this. Flying is something humans have been ...

This poem has a motivating, uplifting theme to it and I enjoy that aspect :) I like the lyrical repetition you've included: To live, to live, to live in a ...

I like this poem! It's short and simple, but has a lot of meaning to it. It reminds me about life and when I meet people passing by and then ...

So glad this is nice and short ;) Anyway, I like this haiku because: 1) It rhymes. Many haikus don't rhyme so it's nice to stumble across one that does. ...

This is a good poem and do you know why? (You probably do, but oh well.) It's because you expressed your own thoughts in a somewhat-lyrical form. I love poetry ...