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Okay, so: amazing voice, amazing melody. It goes perfect! I sorta love it. The lyrics are great! Love the metaphors and how you use figurative language. I want to add ...

I love the story and concept of this. It was mostly well-executed. I loved the use of figurative language, too! My only critique is that rhymes seemed a bit forced ...

I love this! I actually struggle a lot with self-image and other's perception of me, and this was done amazingly! I love the wording, flow and repetition.... Great job!

I actually really enjoyed this. It took me a few lines to find the rhythm, but when I did, this completely wowed me. I honestly love it so much. Usually ...

Thank you! You're so kind! I actually struggled with the rhythm a bit, but I decided to listen to my brother when he told me not to change it. I'm ...

I'm literally about to cry. You're so nice, thank you. The rain metaphor sorta came from one night when I was texting a girl I wasn't exactly dating, but I ...