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Colorful blocks fell out of their box, sliding and rolling across the hardwood floor. They climbed up onto her bed, slipping underneath her, stacking up, lifting the poor girl until ...

Yeah, I originally had a whole other idea for it, something that would be more obvious in the romance section. But then, I posted it, and it was a bit ...

Lol. Twilight Zone is exactly what I was going for.

I really stink at critiqueing... is it even spelled like that? ANYWAY, I really liked it. This sounds odd, but the writing was like... pretty. Especially the first sentence.