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Thanks for the review! I see what you%u2019re saying, I%u2019ll have to go back and fix some of the things when I edit!

No problem! I%u2019m happy to help! (:

Great minds think alike, ha ha!

I think that's the right idea, but I suggest you made the second line in the stanza longer like how you did with all the others. Try: Why is lightning/Explained ...

I%u2019m pretty sure it%u2019s because the stanza has five lines instead of four. Is there any way you could reword it to accommodate the four line structure?

Thank you for the review! That 's a good point about the paint, I'll have to figure that out! I'm glad you liked the tone, I'm glad someone else can ...

Thank you for the review! (I need to watch that episode asap) I see what you mean about not focusing on the hypochondriac enough, I'll have to go back and ...

Thank you for the review! I see what you're talking about with the repetition, I'll have to go back when I edit it and fix that. Thanks for pointing it ...

Thank you for reviewing! I see what you mean with the commands, I'll definitely have to fix that. I'll work on it's confusing parts too, because I wasn't sure what ...

Thank you so much for reviewing this! I'm so glad you talked about the alliteration, because it sounded wrong in my head but I didn't know what was wrong or ...

Hey thank you for reviewing! You didn't butcher the meaning, the meaning is totally up for interpretation. (:

Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you liked it! I totally see what you mean about "shunned". I'll take a look at it and see if the wording ...

Thank you for the review! It was really helpful. I just went back and read all the times I wrote "china". Wow, thanks for pointing that out to me.