elfin12

I like this, even though it was sad. It's about a tree, right? Some of your punctuation and capitalization was weird... Sorry, I don't really have a review for you ...

Hello :). Before I start reviewing, I want to say that I loved your first sentences. I liked all of it, but it was hard to read, mainly because of ...

Welcome to YWS! No! I can't believe he(?) did that to Alan! It was an unexpected ending though, which is good. Your main character was shallow, in my opinion; I ...

AMEN! That is what being a Christian means! As soon as I read "I Believe" I was like, ugh, another hopelessly romantic poem. Then I read the first line, and ...

Wow. I wish there was a 'love' button! I am Christian (assuming you are Christian) too (high-five!) I think everyone else already caught everything, so I have nothing to critique. ...

Although this poem is sad, it made me happy when I read it (I know, I'm weird). I thought I was the only one who ever felt that way, and ...

Wow. This is really good! I've always wanted to be able to write like that; I still have a lot of practicing to do, and even then I doubt I'll ...

This is a funny poem! I like it! I only have a few nitpicks to make. Cailey wrote: Under Bad Guy’s arms she shivered and said, “Brrrr!” This line was ...

I liked the idea of this poem, but it didn't flow very well to me at all, although I admit to writing poetry like that, too :). The season analogy ...