elephantwalrus

Eh...the idea was good. The problem was that the paper was way too informal. Don't use common phrases like "huh," and never use exclamation marks in a paper. Don't even ...

I think the questions you asked were good questions, but I think it would add to the poem if you described what each of these questions feel like. Personally, I ...

Dude! I loved your first stanza! Before the first line break, every word was in order and it sounded really amazing! The second stanza threw me for a loop, though...I ...

Honestly, I've never read a poem about math before. I think you did a great job describing the completely different world that is math. It didn't flow well in some ...

Lovely! I liked how much description you used, but the rhythm was all over the place. It's fine the way it is, but it would feel more connected if the ...

I love logic :D. I will probably spend a couple hours this weekend analyzing the logic in this paper; it is very nicely written. I don't know what the format ...

Wow, I love how precise this is! It moved at a good pace, but the flow was interupted with the herhimthemthereitfuturepresent. It's such a cool combination of words though....maybe if ...

I really didn't feel this poem either...sometimes I felt that you were trying to rhyme, and other times it sounded like you were ranting. I would suggest finding other words ...

It's a really relevant topic to teens nowadays, and that's cool, I just don't get why the line breaks are where they are. I think it would feel more connected ...