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Haha, thank you :) I'll keep working at it!

I just wanted to say a few quick things after reading those last two reviews. Yes I realize it is not the best poem in the universe, but I did ...

Thanks Ikafe!

P.S- I definitely got confused with the whole number thing. How every so often a number is thrown in the middle of a paragraph? It's weird. Sorry, the program I'm ...

Beautiful!! It's hard to write 'cause my cousin is messing with my hair....but i'll attempt it!! This poem is actually really ironic for me at the moment, because I just ...

Oh my gosh!! This is a featured work now?!?! Since when?? Whatever! That rocks!! Thanks so much guys!!

Hey, can anybody figure out the meaning??? Anybody at all???

Thanks!! Chapter 1 is posted....please review that as well if you have the time! (I'm not just talking to 1 person, but everybody who reads this and has the time ...

Would it be like cheating to post a couple more poems in this thread as spoilers???

Oh, and thanks Apple!! I'm glad you liked it so much!!

I loved the story and is surely better than the Lakisha thing you did. Oky, why didn't you PM me for this like you every time do? :( The idea ...

Thanks kitty, although there are some things I slightly disagree with. I do agree that I needed to add more character description. My next chapters are getting better... However, Bob's ...

Oh.. I just realized that a word in the 'spoiler' is covered up. I don't know if it will do that for you, but for me the "like" button and ...

awesome! thanks :D :elephant:

This was really good! A few of the lines broke the rythym at first, but after you kept reading they all sort of clicked! Very creative work, and I can ...