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Okay Shubs! I'm excited to read this! Corrections and that sort of thing are in red! The cool stuff that was epic is in purple! My comments are in bold! ...

Okay, so...You know the colour drill, so I wont' repeat myself =D The fourteenth of December. The date of my wedding. As the words unravelled themselves from my father’s mouth, ...

Alright, sorry if this took a little longer than expected, it's been a busy 2 days for me. xD Corrections and the sort highlighted in red. The things that sounded ...

So very, very true... :) This doesn't deserve to be picked apart and critiqued... nothing can critique the passion of a love of The Young Writer's Society. That, my friends, ...

'Ello fire! Corrections and all of that sort of thing highlighted in red! The cool, awesome stuff is highlighted in purple! And my comments are in bold! -- “I've found ...

Alright! Here as promised and those cupcakes made my stomach growl! He fidgets in the classroom seat, fingers wringing and knotting, gnawing his nails down to ragged red splinters with ...

Alright! Here's the deal; Corrections and all of that awkward stuff is highlighted in red! The stuff that I loved/liked/thought was funny and/or adorable is in purple! My own comments ...

Rhiiinoooooo! Okay, I'm here. Again. Because you told me to be! Let's get down to buisiness! It took him a while to notice that I was actually there. He seemed ...

'Ello! Here as promised! Corrections and the sort are in red! All of the stuff I thought was epic is in purple! And my own comments are in bold! - ...

Well, I'm actually here! =D Colours, are of course, the same. Let's see if I can find anything special to point out...>.> I’d always hated hospitals. The bland colours, the ...

Alrighty!! You know the colour drill already, so I won't repeat it. ;) Let's do this! Chapter 3 – Where worries start “What?” cried Lakea and Hail, jumping to their ...

Okay, here as promised! Those cupcakes made me drool. xD Things that sounded awkwardish/needed to be corrected in red! Epic stuff in purple! My own comments in bold! ~ ~ ...

Alright, so, overall this is pretty good. There were a few errors here and there, but I'm not going to highlight them all, as it seems like it's already been ...

'Ello Skinsy!! You give me some epic pictures, you know that?? That banana rocked my socks! Anyways..You probably know this but Imma say it anyways. Corrections/all that junk in red! ...

Alright, and here I am again! I'll pretend I didn't read the last two reviews and do things my way again xD (I always do that.) Once again: Stuff that ...