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Hi :) This is amazing, I really like it. You've got a fantastic idea for an entertaining story,I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work. There are a few points in the ...

Hello :D Wow this is great, I really like the way this is written because what you have written about is something that is a little confusing, and unclear if ...

Hello :D I really enjoyed reading this piece, and I like the portrayal of emotions. I think that when you wrote this you had it planned out exactly in your ...

Hey :D I like this alot, I could imagine it as a proper song. Good work. :D

Hey :D This isn't half bad, in fact it's rather good actually! I really like it because it's very original and it's thoughtful. Good job :D XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

Heyyyy. I love this, good use of metaphors, Hendo would be proud! lol :D Thorpie is sat next to me taking the mick out of everything i write, what a ...

Hello, fancy seeing you here!! LOL! Amazing poem as they all are and I still have the last lines that you ripped off the bottom of your poem! You are ...

Hey :D I love your poem!!! It's really realistic and as you read it you know exactly what each line means. Some poems are just a load of gibberish but ...

Hey, Great story, however there are a few points I have to make. First of all there are some major puncuation errors, I mean I didn't know what was going ...

Hello, This poem is fantastic! The way that you can get so much meaning out of everyday winter things is incredible. You are a very talented writer! I think this ...

Hey! Another piece of fantastic writing. Okay, so there are some major grammar errors but you can sort them out yourself. Yeah, give us more description! Include sight, smell, touch, ...

Hiya and welcome to YWS! Okay, I really like the idea for your story and it's very well written. However there is something about it that doesn't quite flow. I ...

Hey, I really enjoyed reading your writing because I can think that everybody can relate to Katy in one way or another. I have friend who is just like her, ...

Hi and Merry Christmas! I really enjoyed reading your work, you have great style of writing. I like the way you tie in the facts with the action, it's a ...

Cool, I really like it. It's really original! I especially like the line "The Earl was drunk." That line is clever, yeah there's just something about this poem. I'm not ...