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Wow O.O I actually really felt that. A very simple and short work this may be, but I think it's sweet like that. Honestly the only flaws I can point ...

I really liked the concept. It's an intresting subject. I have always been fascinated with magic shows since I was young and to put it into an objective like yours, ...

This is so romantic. Wow. You were missing a couple much needed commas and an "a", and the message is also pretty simple and straight out but I think the ...

I really like the message! It's very powerful and overall an untouched ground as many are afraid that criticizing war and the sacrificial soldiers will be considered as trying to ...

Wow, that last bit was very impactful. The lines "A doll, that wishes to be free." really hit home. Other than that, I would call this a "nice" poem, very ...

Ok, first review >.< sorry if I am a bit lacking. Anyways, I think this is very beautifully written. The only problem I had was with the eight line. Also, ...