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Re: Is It Only Me?
Hey wow this was really good! I like your style but I think you could have made this a little longer and more punctuation would have helped better with where ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Now She's Gone
Hey this is really good but sad. It kind of reminds me of a song and I think you know what it is since you put part of the lyrics ...
Apr 6, 2016 -
Re: The Labyrinthian Mind- Chapter 2
Hey I really liked this you should keep going with this! I didn't see any misspellings but I will check again. I liked how most of it was made up ...
Apr 6, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.11)
Hey this was really good and I liked it. I didn't see any misspelling but I will check again. I am left with many questions now as to how this ...
Apr 6, 2016 -
Re: vi
Hey Mr. Holmes didn't get his oatmeal! Haha this was really good and I like it because you put a lot of humor into this. I didn't see any misspellings ...
Apr 5, 2016 -
Re: v - our world
Hey this was good but it kid of felt short to me. You should make the reader kind of guess what's going to happen next instead of telling us what's ...
Apr 5, 2016 -
Re: Sea Fever
Hey this was really good! I didn't see any misspelling or anything but I will go back and check again. Other than that I really liked it. To me the ...
Apr 5, 2016 -
Re: Overtaken Pt. 1
Hey this is really good! From what I seen, I didn't see any mistakes or misspellings but I kind of read it fast. This is the first tie I've really ...
Apr 5, 2016