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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Crawlers - Chapter Six: The Farm

    You’ve done you’re big one, Rev. This chapter is awesome, thrilling and unpleasant in a good way. This is my favourite part: His family always used to have bonfires. Any ...

    Jul 30
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Stained Pages - Part Two

    Hey, I’m back :D This story is so cute, Poppy’s and Micheal’s friendship especially ( ;) ). Poppy being left out at her job makes me so sad for her, ...

    Jul 30
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Stained Pages - Part One

    Hey Valkyria :D I’m gonna review both of your chapters on Stained pages! I think this is a lovely story and a good first chapter. Poppy is new to her ...

    Jul 30
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Crawlers - Chapter Four: The Hospital

    Hey again, Rev :D Your story is awesome, I keep thinking about that. In this chapter Aubrey is in the hospital; meeting new people and learning more about what led ...

    Jul 29
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter One – Alinea

    Hi!! I saw this in the green room, I’m excited to read your whole story. Blood is a terrible thing to spend when you’re already broke. Seems I’m in debt ...

    Jul 28
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Its Always Been You

    Hey, and welcome to YWS! Feel free to ask questions if you have any ♡ This is such a lovely poem. I love when poetry becomes such as a love ...

    Jul 28
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Crawlers - Chapter Three: The Farm

    Oh, this is by far my favourite chapter. It feels as though you’ve really landed, or maybe me as the reader has landed— understanding place, characters and just everything to ...

    Jul 28
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Crawlers - Chapter Two: The Hospital

    Back for chapter two :) I like this start and the second chapter being completely dedicated for an introduction of a character is amazing. I personally don’t find the dual ...

    Jul 27
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Crawlers - Chapter One: The Farm

    Hey, I saw your second chapter in the green room and thought I’d read the first one first! The setting is amazing. I’m picturing a farm, somewhere around the Uk, ...

    Jul 27
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: You Think Me a Woman

    This is incredibly powerful, and such strong and passionate motives that it makes the readers blood boil too. Highly descriptive, and I especially enjoy the metaphor (cause im a sucker ...

    Jul 27
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: Eternal Beauty | Prologue

    Hello! This is really beautiful. The writing is amazing, I am very inspired. This is a great introduction of characters. What sticks out to me the most is how descriptive ...

    Sep 2, 2025
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: THE SYSTEM

    Oh my god! I love this. This should be a full book, the plot is amazing! And the writing as well, as a non native English speaker it teaches me ...

    Aug 31, 2025


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