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Re: Crawlers - Chapter Six: The Farm
You’ve done you’re big one, Rev. This chapter is awesome, thrilling and unpleasant in a good way. This is my favourite part: His family always used to have bonfires. Any ...
Jul 30 -
Re: Stained Pages - Part Two
Hey, I’m back :D This story is so cute, Poppy’s and Micheal’s friendship especially ( ;) ). Poppy being left out at her job makes me so sad for her, ...
Jul 30 -
Re: Stained Pages - Part One
Hey Valkyria :D I’m gonna review both of your chapters on Stained pages! I think this is a lovely story and a good first chapter. Poppy is new to her ...
Jul 30 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter Four: The Hospital
Hey again, Rev :D Your story is awesome, I keep thinking about that. In this chapter Aubrey is in the hospital; meeting new people and learning more about what led ...
Jul 29 -
Re: Chapter One – Alinea
Hi!! I saw this in the green room, I’m excited to read your whole story. Blood is a terrible thing to spend when you’re already broke. Seems I’m in debt ...
Jul 28 -
Re: Its Always Been You
Hey, and welcome to YWS! Feel free to ask questions if you have any ♡ This is such a lovely poem. I love when poetry becomes such as a love ...
Jul 28 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter Three: The Farm
Oh, this is by far my favourite chapter. It feels as though you’ve really landed, or maybe me as the reader has landed— understanding place, characters and just everything to ...
Jul 28 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter Two: The Hospital
Back for chapter two :) I like this start and the second chapter being completely dedicated for an introduction of a character is amazing. I personally don’t find the dual ...
Jul 27 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter One: The Farm
Hey, I saw your second chapter in the green room and thought I’d read the first one first! The setting is amazing. I’m picturing a farm, somewhere around the Uk, ...
Jul 27 -
Re: You Think Me a Woman
This is incredibly powerful, and such strong and passionate motives that it makes the readers blood boil too. Highly descriptive, and I especially enjoy the metaphor (cause im a sucker ...
Jul 27 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Prologue
Hello! This is really beautiful. The writing is amazing, I am very inspired. This is a great introduction of characters. What sticks out to me the most is how descriptive ...
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Re: THE SYSTEM
Oh my god! I love this. This should be a full book, the plot is amazing! And the writing as well, as a non native English speaker it teaches me ...
Aug 31, 2025
