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nope that would be my fault lol, thanks for helping me on this but I'm really stuck on it at the moment so I'm giving up on it for now ...

yea I forgot that :oops: sorry :oops: I keep forgetting there's more ways to spell a name it's just I'm so used to seeing it spelt with an A cz ...

Emma don't flame me for this but we're trying to help you out by giving you constructive crit and you seem to take it the wrong way and seem to ...

“I’m not going to hurt you,” he said gently, “I’m just going to untie your wrists.” He turned her around and pulled at the knot on her wrist, while he ...

I know I don't mean to keep repeating things but it's a bit of a habit. Like some things I'll repeat because they need to be or because it's important ...

lol I love the sarcasm from Suzie and the spit bubbles thing lol can easily picture that happening...

Hey thanks for reading it guys, when I write I like to try and keep the reader in suspense that's why I leave things out like her dying over centuries, ...