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Re: Chapter One of "Thirst", part one
Hey! You have me a bit confused about the order of your posts. Is this the one I should read after the prologue or is it Chapter one? If it's ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Diary Of A Teenage Disaster 3
Brilliant! The cat with rabies really made me laugh, great idea :D The meeting with the boys is also very amusing, and your description of Danny is very good, I ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Diary Of A Teenage Disaster 1
Very funny piece. I like the language and the apparent overdramatization of the events. This girl really knows how to exaggerate small events, which makes the character funny and the ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: Thirst, prologue
The 2nd person approach sent chills down my spine. I loved it, because it makes the reader involved from the first sentence. I have to admit that I got a ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Crystalline
Hi! A great post indeed, it's very hard to believe that you haven't written much fantasy before. I myself am a great fan of reading fantasy and I have pretty ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Love Is Pain
I think most of us have been there. I wrote a sad and depressing poem when a guy I liked chose another girl as well. Your poem is very good, ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Inalienable Chapter 1
Wow! This is a very good beginning to a promising novel! Apart from a few typing mistakes it's very good. I like the plot, a teen who has superpowers starting ...
Apr 7, 2009
