dragons

welcome to the forum world and unfortunetly i have nothing to give except for my advice ............................. ....................... ................. ............ ......... ....... ..... ...

This piece is a well, masterpiece in my eyes my only suggestion is that one, you make a new paragraph each time someone new talks and two keep writing i ...

i love dragons as i have researched them for four years and am still doing so today and in my personal opinion this is a wonderful personification of them well ...

oh my gosh they should totally make a love on YWS thing that you can click that is the best story i have ever heard to tell you the truth ...

emmylou1995 i have seen a lot of works that ave surprised me on how good they are and how they are organized and i have to say I'm very surprised ...

Hi the names dragons and i will be your critique for the afternoon first i think you should separate all the dialogue so that each new statement is a new ...

oh my gosh that is so good in fact you just loosened my writers block thank you soo much i was starting to think my writing career was over and ...

i love your poem your dad and my dad would get along perfectly he says tht if he lets me go anywhere hes afraid ill run away from him so ...