dragonlover92

Thanks guys! I really enjoyed reading these, and thank you for really reviewing and not just sugar coating it.

Thanks for the review ill work on it!

thanx a ton for the review!

Thanx! I edit it rate now and add in the commas.

Thanx! Ya i realized that i forgot commas rate after i posted it, but i couldn't find the edit button. lol Also do you have any suggestions on how to ...

I like this a lot! it explores all the bits it our generation and i really enjoyed reading!

Wow, very good and i liked the rythems. But it seemed kind of lifeless like it didnt give a feel of what she was feeling. maybe use more descriptive verbs ...

Thanks guys! ya I wasn't sure how to put it into lines but thank you for the help I really needed it!

Its good. It gives me and image of a person in an empty room in the dark with no way out, searching for a way out. You did a very ...

I like it!

Wow this was amazing! The hole time i was reading it i had one friend on my mind and u described the love u have for her and what I ...

Wow! That made me laugh!! Very interesting and clever! All i can say!

Ok thank you

I like it, first thought u were going to be cliche at the end but you were more showing how no one really knows anyone and people have a side ...

This is good but the one thing that i did get stuck on while reading was the 'And' on the 5th line. It might read more smoothly if you take ...