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All your comments were great! I am so glad his madness at the start came across well, though the broken lines were more a result of trying to match the ...

Thanks so much for your review! I wasn't expecting this take on Crepuscule's character and it was interesting to see how he looks in the eyes of a reader who ...

I'm so glad this chapter had the impact I was hoping. I went heavy on the descriptions but it still ended up being a bit short for a full chapter. ...

I'm torn between being excited about how this is all going to end and sad that it is almost done. I feel like I still have so many questions about ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad to see someone new taking a look at even one chapter of my book. The chains might be a bit overused ...

Thanks so much for all your thoughts on this :) I was so excited to reveal the origins of Jarid's strength, though I was surprised at how much you talked ...

I wanted to extend the length of this chapter so if you have anything you think might add to this dark and ominous character, feel free to let me know. ...

Thanks so much for your advice. Honestly I was so focused on the big event of the chapter I may have rushed through the details in the first part. Also, ...

By the way, about Thousand Foot Krutch. I just listened to a few songs and I think I've found a new artist to add to my favorites playlist! Thanks so ...

Thanks so much for the review! This was a chapter I really enjoyed writing. I was curious though, there was a certain line Jarid says as soon as Briar starts ...

Thanks again for pointing out those spelling errors. Also, I wasn't sure if I used foolish too much so the fact you mentioned it is great confirmation. I wanted to ...

I am so glad as I wanted to use this chapter as a kind of calm moment between the intense action, though I actually didn't realise how much homesickness was ...

Well, I can't just wait after hearing that I'll enjoy the next chapter now can I? ;) I'm so glad to help, and I really enjoy this story anyway so ...

I love teasing, though most readers wouldn't know about him quite yet. I actually plan to keep teasing him as a potentially good dragon until much later. If you want ...

This is one of the chapters I'm most proud of. I want my story to be realistic as much as possible and it actually gave me more opportunities to provide ...