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Seems we've added another character to the not-so-smart category. I won't comment too much on how the characters were originally intended to be perceived but I am really glad to ...

I love how you took the dragon's side during the fight. Jarid is a self insert character of sorts and I was actually quite shocked that I would have put ...

This was my "wise mentor" moment and I was so nervous about messing it up. Your comments here showed me that I don't have to worry so thanks :)

I'm so glad you are seeing the academy as a whole. It was amazing to see how you are seeing the world at large and at both a species and ...

I'm so glad you found it realistic. I usually try to keep it that way as much as I can. I was a bit surprised by your reaction to Brom ...

Loved your line about THE friend group. Totally the vibe I was going for there ;)

I have so many of your reviews to get to so I may have to keep my replies short. (You have no idea how excited to see them all btw) ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'm going to be checking out all your other ones too. I could really tell that the emotions I was hoping for came across ...

I was worried some readers (especially critics) would want Aurora's death to last a bit longer or have a bigger impact, but I just couldn't leave her out of the ...

Thanks for the review! I will admit this was one of my favorite chapters to write and I also love a good cliffhanger. I was thinking the story needed some ...

Thanks so much for the spelling correction. It's hard when they don't show up on spell check. Also, so glad to have you back and reading again. I'm trying to ...

After reading a few of your reviews now I jsut wanted to say that your style seems unique and I really enjoy how you comment 'in the moment' as you're ...

I am glad that their lack of cohesion is coming across here. I find that siblings (especially young ones) often fight even more than rivals so I wanted to show ...

Thanks so much for the review! It was very informative to see what someone either new or coming back to this might be thinking about. I'm so glad you enjoyed ...

Wow! Such an amazing review! Its great to see how someone who hasn't read much of the book reacts to the more recent chapters. (If you haven't realised it already, ...