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Thanks for the corrections. I will totally add some question marks to the WHAT at the start

Thanks so much for your comments and corrections. I will be putting this through a grammar site for final product but for now I%u2019m just using Word and correcting what ...

Shadow is tied to Jarid for now and can't even consider leaving him behind. If you want an idea of who might have come and burned Dragon Valley it is ...

So glad you enjoyed Jeff! I wanted to do a big comedic moment in complete contrast to the expected situation and I was worried I went too far with the ...

This section is a bit weirdly spaced out for now since I%u2019m not sure how long the end of this wing will take to complete. I may get the chance ...

So glad you enjoyed %uD83D%uDE0A I have noticed the it%u2019s vs its is a struggle of mine. Thanks for pointing it out. Also, this book is split into parts (Wings) ...

I am so glad to see that you 'enjoyed' the cave scene. I wanted to give the dragonets a bit of a personal experience with one of the more 'tame' ...

Thanks so much for the corrections. I corrected the spelling mistakes now. The part about them saying 'me' instead of 'us' is because, though they are singing as a group, ...

So glad to see your thoughts on Wing 3 as a whole. I realise it seemed a bit rushed at the end and I actually ended up cutting out three ...

All I can say is that your comments are unique and give me a wonderful perspective through which I can view my own book. Thanks so much for reviewing!

This was one of my favorite chapters to write and though I have plans to give Lt. Briar an even more permanent burial in the future, I am glad this ...

What a wonderful name for this terrible character. I actually based him off a character I read in another book who I genuinely despised (big props to the Author of ...

The exhilaration of flight is always something I've dreamed of and so I try to make a point of being extra descriptive whenever it occurs. So glad you enjoyed this ...

I'm honestly amazed by how many reviews you did all in a row. Maybe it's my ADHD but I couldn't imagine sitting down for this long. Great job!

I like how you picked up on how horrifying mind control can be. (If you want to see it used by a truly evil being on the other side, read ...