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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 5
Hi again! Dragonight here to review another amazing chapter :) As I'm reading through: That was so interesting that the medicine actually worked (at least for a while) and then ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 4
Hi Raven, hope you're having a great day. Here's my review. As I'm reading through: I think your first sentence could have been worded a bit better though it still ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 3
Hi Raven, hope you're having a great day. Here's my review. As I'm reading through: Man I couldn't stop myself. I usually am able to find points to comment on ...
Dec 13, 2023 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 2
Hi Raven, can't wait to read more of your story. I forgot to mention this last time but I really like the cover art. Did you make it yourself or ...
Dec 9, 2023 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 1
Hi again, I'm really intrigued by this new character and the darkness within. As I'm reading through: I liked your description of Kita at the start, it set the mood ...
Dec 7, 2023 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Prologue
Hi, Dragonight here. I'm so excited to read your story. I'm not the best at reviews but I hope my comments help. What I noticed while reading: I really liked ...
Dec 7, 2023 -
Re: A Handful of Stars
I really like this poem. I was able to feel the sadness and loss expressed by the disappearing natural beauty of the stars. The conception of the stars as old ...
Nov 29, 2023 -
Re: Glow In the Dark Ceiling Stars
Hi, I hope you're have a great day/week. First of all, I really liked the story you told though this poem. I used to have those glow-in-the-dark stars in my ...
Nov 21, 2023 -
Re: ​Violating Sexual Scripts and Men and Abstinence
Hi, I am a psychology student who is bad at writing essays so take my advice with that in mind. I really like this topic which is why I'm leaving ...
Oct 28, 2023 -
Re: Runaway-Prologue
Hi, I haven't read your work before but it seems pretty interesting. First I wanted to comment that this may be a hard read for some people since it seems ...
Oct 21, 2023 -
Re: Kagiso - Chapter 9
Hi, Dragonight here to review this awesome chapter. Overall comments: I love works with dragons in them so I read this piece and enjoyed it so much I also read ...
Oct 5, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 10
Just wanted to say I liked the dragon portion of this chapter a lot. You have a very good way of describing what is happening in a full bodied way. ...
Sep 29, 2023 -
Re: The Countdown: first part
I love it! Don't want to misinterpret your work but you totally described how God loves us with this piece so that's how I'm going to view it. I really ...
Sep 26, 2023 -
Re: Scars In Blue: Part 1: Chapter 5: Shadows and Fire
Wow, cool story! I really like the idea of a princess who can hear the voices of flames and the mystery of her father's disappearance. I decided to start with ...
Sep 22, 2023 -
Re: Fault
Wow, ouch. This hit me in the feels. I totally relate to making everything my fault and blaming myself for the misdeeds of others. Thinking about it now we must ...
Sep 11, 2023
