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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Prologue

    Hi, Dragonight here. I'm so excited to read your story. I'm not the best at reviews but I hope my comments help. What I noticed while reading: I really liked ...

    Dec 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Technology Re: A Handful of Stars

    I really like this poem. I was able to feel the sadness and loss expressed by the disappearing natural beauty of the stars. The conception of the stars as old ...

    Nov 29, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Glow In the Dark Ceiling Stars

    Hi, I hope you're have a great day/week. First of all, I really liked the story you told though this poem. I used to have those glow-in-the-dark stars in my ...

    Nov 21, 2023
  • Article / Essay » Health, Culture Re: ​Violating Sexual Scripts and Men and Abstinence

    Hi, I am a psychology student who is bad at writing essays so take my advice with that in mind. I really like this topic which is why I'm leaving ...

    Oct 28, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Runaway-Prologue

    Hi, I haven't read your work before but it seems pretty interesting. First I wanted to comment that this may be a hard read for some people since it seems ...

    Oct 21, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Kagiso - Chapter 9

    Hi, Dragonight here to review this awesome chapter. Overall comments: I love works with dragons in them so I read this piece and enjoyed it so much I also read ...

    Oct 5, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Williwaw Chapter 10

    Just wanted to say I liked the dragon portion of this chapter a lot. You have a very good way of describing what is happening in a full bodied way. ...

    Sep 29, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Countdown: first part

    I love it! Don't want to misinterpret your work but you totally described how God loves us with this piece so that's how I'm going to view it. I really ...

    Sep 26, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Scars In Blue: Part 1: Chapter 5: Shadows and Fire

    Wow, cool story! I really like the idea of a princess who can hear the voices of flames and the mystery of her father's disappearance. I decided to start with ...

    Sep 22, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fault

    Wow, ouch. This hit me in the feels. I totally relate to making everything my fault and blaming myself for the misdeeds of others. Thinking about it now we must ...

    Sep 11, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 1

    Hi, cool story. Can't wait to see where this goes. This gave me strange Harry Potter vibes with the normal seeming world while a hidden magic world hides just beneath ...

    Sep 9, 2023
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Witch Trainee, the Prince, and the Blue Dragon

    What an incredible story! I like how you started by giving us the family situation of Yvonne. It really helped me understand the ending with the Hag's request and her ...

    Sep 9, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Dragon

    This story is very interesting. I originally decided to read it since I love dragons and often see them as very human like in their mannerisms. Very similar to your ...

    Sep 9, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Culture Re: Angels and Gargoyles

    Wow! I'm the kind of guy who loves a creature with a good heart and monstrous appearance. I've always believed that we judge too much on appearances and your poem ...

    Sep 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Other Re: Foxmaster- who is she really? intro

    Hi Foxmaster! Been a while. Right off the bat I wanted to ask if this is the character your profile was based on or vice versa. I was really excited ...

    Sep 6, 2023


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