dragonfphoenix

ah, I see that now. my apologies. the hyphen at the end of the previous stanza is what threw me off.

I believe this is what I was remembering as not getting written humor. Um...not in those exact words, no, but you pretty much did portray nerds that way. You'll "try ...

Yes, it's called a "break" and is typically accomplished by putting *** or ~~~ And then you pick up with someone else. But if that's what you're wanting to do, ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! As is, this is poetic prose *snarls and slashes at screen*...Ahem. *straightens tie*. Sorry. Anyway, yes this is prose, but no it's not a story. ...

Please don't take my focus on solely the negative to mean I don't like your story. I have a bad habit of only writing about the bad (especially since I'm ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! This was good, but your rhythm was off in the third line of the second stanza (three beats shy of the pattern). And the last ...

:) I'm of the school that believes grammar rules are descriptions of what we do, and are therefore determined by how we use our words and such. Although I do ...

With your grammatical suggestions, I would parry that all of them are style related. For the first one, I like the comma there, what I consistently refer to as a ...

I didn't think the descriptions were too bad (in fact they're kind of short for my normal style), but that one sentence you quoted was really wordy. I think that ...

Haha, I love it! Good job!

Simplest solution: shorten the blade. Make it a pocket knife or something like that. Even a hunting dagger would be believable, although you'd have to make sure to say several ...

Lady Ariana, you err in saying that those are typos. Of those quotes, there are only omitted style commas; there are no misspellings or incorrect grammar. I hope you have ...

No prob, glad to help

Well, like I said I was remembering incorrectly (since you pointed it out and now I remember and I'm like "Oh, he did. Okay."). I get that there was more ...

Ah, sorry. Forward slash means a line break or new line poetry. That is, "Too many times Have I reviewed And not explained What this means" in quotation format is ...