dragonfphoenix

My point was and continues to be that you gave no constructive criticism. Part of the definition is offering suggested improvements. You quoted lines and then made statements you didn't ...

While I can respect your opinion that there are many poems that need improvement on YWS, I feel as inclined as you were to point out my list that such ...

I'm surprised the Pumpkin Spice hasn't been referenced yet... ;)

Ooh, good idea. :) Thanks. Guess what's probably coming down the pipeline next... ;P

*marked as review* Got it!

With the back to back, yeah, I probably should have changed that. The previous which occurred two sentences before. It still felt rather lengthy, though. As far as the coming ...

There's really no good "sciencey" term to interchange with that (at least that I can drag off the top of my head at the moment). Ugh. Genetically. Why must you ...

Haha, oopsies on the block text. Didn't really reformat before publishing. XD Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I never really went back and dechunked it. XD I'll probably get around to that at some point. (Hopefully.) Glad you liked the piece. Thanks ...

This was... Wow. I'm not a huge grammar Nazi (well, okay, maybe :P ), and this was absolutely hilarious. This was just " paaaaaaaaaain ah-haha that's hilarious." Good job. (Unable ...

Definitely improved. :D Could still be revised a little, but my brain's going to mush and I'm not sure how to be helpful. XD Maybe getting another opinion (focused on ...

Okay. A bit of advice: draw it out, and write it as plainly as possible to yourself. Then rewrite the description again as simply as possible. Final synthesis would be ...

Using adverbs/adjective phrase thingies (XD) is okay on occasion. You don't want to bog it down, though, with too many. Then readers start thinking you're padding. My philosophy for dialogue ...

Thanks for the review! Quick summary response: Revolutionaries don't always improve a society's lot, but that's often their presentation or original intention (whether or not you agree with the change

Thanks for the review! And I would expect no less than a real review. (Dedication is not an implied bribe for fluff. :D ) I guess part of the problem ...