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Knight Dragon, here to review on this wonderful Review Day! ...and the little light that remained shed light over... Just a quick comment on the repeated "light." The second time ...

Knight Dragon, here to review on this wonderful Review Day! for no reason other than that it tickles them to life." I've noticed that some of your word choices feel ...

Knight Dragon, here to review on this wonderful Review Day! Head's up, I'm coming into this without having read any of the previous chapters (that I know of), but I'll ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! Okay, I'm slightly confused, and I'm wondering if it's just because you haven't done any back-editing. You have many chapters of this story posted, but ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! Are you typing this on a tablet or something? The missing capitols beyond the first word of the sentence makes it seem like it is. ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! Fair warning, I'm coming into this cold. You should have established, or laid the foundation for, your story by now, so let's see where we're ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! My first thought when I saw your author's note: Seriously, though, it's okay. :D All right, on to the review. „Hush“, I calmed the I'm ...

Knight Dragon, here to review on this wonderful Review Day! I love the shivering precise light on a droplet as it whistles toward the tiles from behind my ear This ...

Knight Dragon, here to review on this glorious Pokemon Review Day! I'm still trying to grasp your choice of capitalization. The first three stanza, no capitalization, and the last two, ...

Knight Dragon, here to review on this wonderful Review Day! Wandering around like mindless zombies, Optimist minds chasing their improbable fantasies. The comma slows down the reading there. You have ...

Knight Dragon, here to review on this wonderful Review Day! (And gotta heart ALL the Pokemons!!!) They died pathetically, squawking once like chickens when hit and then spiraling to the ...

Knight Dragon, here to review on this wonderful Review Day! Wow. That was...different. I'm not sure I picked up on why "lethal wit" was so important, though, or what its ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! Ooh, a structured poem. Interesting. I feel the word is spinning and I am still. That "and" threw me off a little. I was waiting ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! I feel compelled to reiterate the "that's one stupid guard dog" sentiment. How intelligent are these hell hounds? Are they normal dog smart, or smarter? ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! (Hoping to keep this brief because I stayed up too late. XD) All he could hear was the tramp-tramp-tramp of the circus-folks’ feet as they ...