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Re: All Babies Are Blessings (1)
Hi, unsterblichkeit36 Thanks so much for the review! I actually do have some more of this story, the next part's just a tad bit long (it's a dream and kind ...
Wed Jul 23, 2008 10:22 pm -
Re: An Ode to My Fabulous Mother
Thanks so much to you guys who reviewed this. I fixed all of the mistakes you stated. Thanks for that, I'm not really sure about all the rules of poetry ...
Fri Jul 11, 2008 1:40 am -
Re: Rain dance.
Hey Kris, I really liked the format of this poem, very intriguing, and I liked the muddy tongue part. It's a great poem. -Dommy
Mon Jul 07, 2008 6:51 pm -
Re: An Ode to My Fabulous Mother
Dear Kris, Thanks so much for reviewing my poem! And i totally understand the whole Ode part, it doesn't make sense at all considering the poem, hehe. :lol: Thanks again. ...
Mon Jul 07, 2008 6:47 pm -
Re: Poisoned Roses--Chapter 7
Ashley I really like this story. I read all seven chapters in one day, ha, it's so good! PM me when you write more. I can't wait! ~Domenique
Wed Jul 02, 2008 5:29 pm -
Re: Lullaby
AMAZING!! I love it!! man, its so true!! I can't find anything else to say except it was soo good!
Fri Jun 20, 2008 1:12 am -
Re: silent suicide
I really loved the idea and how you presented it. I loved the part when you said: I died, only to prove that I was no longer invisible. But nothing ...
Sat May 24, 2008 12:36 am -
Re: My Own Worst Enemy
Hey guys, I rewrote this and there's a revised version somewhere on the forum. If you could read that it would be great. Thanks! -Domenique
Thu May 22, 2008 9:03 pm -
Re: beneath the skin
Okay that is probably one of the best things I've read on the site. Your metaphors were absolutely amazing. Submit more, man they're great! - Domenique
Mon May 19, 2008 10:51 pm