dolwright

Very Interesting story but surprisingly short, I expected a continuing scene; but anyways maybe it's a plot to keep the reader in suspense. In the second paragraph, "What?", a comma ...

OK, I think anyone reading this will definitely feel the hatred and passion for whoever, I really don't know the details of your rant about this news anchor but you ...

Interesting story of life after death, Nice Imagery and plot. One thing though, I couldn't quite figure out what happened at the end. I got lost in the concluding paragraphs, ...

Hi Writewriter, I'm sorry for what you had to go through, I can say I understand what you feel because I've been abused and tortured as a kid too, I ...

Nice structure and rhyming. Love the overall feeling this poem gives. It's perfect. "I will not beg my broken heart to heal, To feel, "Because in the end, I don't ...

HI DeeBee, This is a wonderful piece you have written here. from your words I can tell you are a christian which is also wonderful. Though there are a few ...

Hi, This article is good, and would have been great if you used more imagery. The reader would like an elaborate description of life in Delhi, what you missed the ...

This is absolutely Brilliant. I read about the news of the riot online and I can't help but wonder why some people prefer to be agents of destruction instead of ...

This is Good writing! I assume this line," ...they always like to trade. Information for something shiny is a continuous statement so the period sign should be deleted. The story ...

This is a Job well done except for one correction though: "I fell over (the) said squishy-stubby object" It is amusing and the imagery was on point, it was like ...

I think this poem should is capable of making you a super duper poet. No kidding. Apart from the grammatical structure that needs reconstructing, you did a very good job ...

Good outlay of poem, it just needs some reconstructing; "Music laves her days"; i checked up the word 'laves' in the dictionary and could not find any meaning to it; ...

I think this piece would definitely make any father proud, though i agree with the others, the poor sentence structures can put the reader off but you did your best ...

You did a good job on this one! Though i wish the lines were more rich in context and style, it still does a good job in revealing the conflict ...

Hi Zana, i'm so sorry this is coming late,i was busy eith this semester exams, i know i promised to give my review..so..here goes...this is absolutely perfect! the way the ...