dogs

Great writing i really like it i do! however.... some small things i would like to point out. Great plot line but you need to add some more variety and ...

hey this is dogs here like every one else all of the words mixed up makes it hard to read and it really really gets to me. and exatly what ...

hey this is dogs and i'll be reviewing your poem. first of all you broke the rules. you see we have a two to one ratio here. you have to ...

hey this is dogs. first of all. welcome to YWS. hope you enjoy it here that is quite the title for a poem. and i noticed that the poem really ...

hey hey hey, dogs here i liked this poem and i think that this is rather good. however what is the message that you are trying to get across???? i ...

hey moonstar, this is dogs here. I really like your poem. i am not a fan of love stories but this one was okay. I liked it when you reapeat ...

hey winter, this is dogs here I liked your poem and i totally relate to the message. it flows nicely and it sounds pretty good. however i have some quick ...

hey "dreamer", dogs here I really really liked this poem. and i defnitly agree with the message. i would like to go on about the harp but that not why ...

hey kaily this is dogs. you reviewed one of my poems so i guess i'll just return the favor kaily. i am not a huge fan of love stories but ...

hey hey hey. dogs here apart from the grammar errors i loved reading this poem. the ending was my favorite part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really got the meaning in this poem. i ...

hey "break my heart" dogs here I loved reading your poem and it really sounds great. i can't find any spelling errors or any errors for that matter Overall this ...

hey paperdollx this is dogs here I really really enjoyed reading your poem it sounds great and it has a very strong ending my favorite stanza is the is the ...

hey Chevy, this is dogs and i am going to be your critic. I love this poem. i really really really like it. it flows nicely sounds good, and i ...

hey hypocrit, dogs here I like this poem but i don't understand at all what you are telling us. the entire second stanza i don't get at all. what do ...

hey hey hey drama queen, dogs here. I love your poem. i completely relate to it totally. this flows really well. and it sounds great the only thing i would ...