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OOO scary realities. They make me sad :( but whatever there are some quick small things I wanted to point out on your piece She was the rock in his ...

Hiya dogs here. First of all this is a good start I enjoyed it. And its got a good ending to that half of the chapter. But there are a ...

Hello dogs here. Okay this is a good starter for a novel. I see lots of potential in this. I really like the discription of the fat princible and how ...

Hiya I'm dogs as you could guess at your service! Okay for starters... But in that crown I'm sure resides A ruby red Not tarnished brown. Well this sure sounds ...

HaHa sounds like the relationship I have with my Girl Friend. Quite intertaining I must say. But enough about me more about your story. It sounds great and it realy ...

Whoa! Great start! I'm impressed by your writing I must say. You make it seem so real which I truly enjoy and it really brings the reader into the moment. ...

Well thanks for the replies on my book. (took me a good long while to find your piece but hey i found it lol) I just have a quick question. ...

Well i liked this poem although i thought it was a little ironic with ur picture of a baby writing about love lol (side note) This is a good piece ...

This is very nice but like the post above it still is a bit of a work in progress. I do like the flow but its just a little choppy. ...

I like it. You were a critic for one of my pieces so i guessed i should return the favor. I totally feel you on your theme i get in ...

Well very nice and cute short story. I truly liked it but i think you should add a little bit more. just think what does the character want to achive ...

......... WHOA THATS A GOOD STARTING CHAPTER! Got me hooked on the first chapter and thats what i love in books. I am truely intreged by your FANTASTIC work here. ...

Very nice starter i can see lots of potential coming from this piece. However your last line when you say You could say that people who think this are crazy. ...

Wow great plot line i really enjoy it so far. But like the post above i did discover a couple mistakes. For example. like the post above try to focus ...

Well i enjoy your poem it sounds great. But a quick few suggestions. First of all... its too short, not that theres anything wrong with short poems but this could ...