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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Lovers Love

    Hey Justin! Dogs here with your review. I agree with everything Anna says. Similes and metaphors and personification in particular make your poetry so much stronger. Also you use a ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Long Road

    Hey Mikko! Dogs here with your review today! Nice avatar! Cute :D. Anyways back to your review, I think this is a good piece of poetry but it dosn't have ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Lune

    Hey Kyllorac! Dogs here with your review today! I really loved this piece. So much imagery. You took on, in my opinion, the hardest style of writing poems and in ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Floating

    Hey bird! Dogs here back for ROUND THREE OF THE DAY!!!!!! YAYYYYYYYY! I think you might take the trophy home with you for most poetry posts in a day. lol, ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hidden in Plastic

    Hey Emoticon! Dogs here with your review today! Awesome avatar ;) I pown at COD lol. Anyways! This is a great idea for a poem, I like how the idea ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: All the World is Glass

    Hey Ignatius! Dogs here with your review today!!!! Great poem you have here! soooo much imagery and description one right after anouther. The imagery and description is sooo strong it ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Useless Colors

    Hey Bird! Dogs here with your second reivew of the day from me WOO HOOO!!!!!! Firstly i would like to point out that this is an excellent poem! In my ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re:

    Hey Spinelli! Dogs here wtih your review today! This is a great idea for a poem and I really love how you center it around god. Very original to have ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: She gives

    Hey harry! COME ONE IF YOU DON'T GIVE ME AN IDEA FOR A NICK NAME I'LL JUST GIVE YOU ONE AND YOU MAY OR MAY NOT LIKE IT! lol anyways..... ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Overwhelmed

    Hey Bird! Dogs here with your review today! This is a great idea for a poem and you get your topic and idea across very well so props to you ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The glorious resolve

    Hey Zaid! Dogs here with your review today! Great poem you have! I really like it because of the strong imagery and that imagery is more so in the voice ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hello!

    Hey Chaos!!! Dogs here with your review today! I totally agree with everything Author of my life says, be sure to listen to him. Also, adding to that. I really ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Fallen Snow

    Hey Mirasol! Dogs here with your review today! I really loved this piece! I liked the strong imagery you throw in there! Oh and fyi i TOTALLY AGREE WINTER SUCKS ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hope lights up.

    Hey Zaid! Dogs here with your review today! This piece is really good! Strong imagery and i like the rhyming! You really paint a great picture in the readers head ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: On Loving a Shadow

    Hey Peanut! Dogs here with your review today! Really quickly can i just say THIS IS FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG ...

    Dec 5, 2011


And on the pedestal these words appear:/'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings;/Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'/Nothing beside remains.
— Percy Bysshe Shelley