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Hello there Kayla! Dogs here with your review today. You have a good piece to start, a nice idea taking the conception of grand and loved performers and not that ...

ooooo creepy poem Niteowl. Been a little while since I reviewed, as always Tucker here with your review :). I like the topic of this, your goal here is just ...

"I am met by a wall of white" Ok, I think this is a bit of a weak imagery note to start this chapter on. Especially because you're so good ...

Hello there Wind! Tucker here with your review as requested. To start off, I think you have an excellent ending, especially with from what I read of the prologue. I ...

Howdy Tink! Dogs here with your review. Okey dokey, certainly have improved on this piece, I enjoyed reading it. A few quick notes though, at this point I don't think ...

Hey there Ariana! Dogs here with your review today, my spell check isn't working so I appologize in advance for any spelling errors I have. Anywho on to the review, ...

Hey there Wind! Dogs here with your review, as requested. Ok, to start things off you have a great opening with the sky bleeding light, your description of the light ...

"we are losing this bad" Grammar error, this should be "losing this badly." Also, The Katana swords for a basketball team? Lol, made me chuckle a bit but I think ...

Hello there mb! Dogs here with your review today. Nice poem you have here, a little cliche of a topic but you make it work. Although, firstly I would suggest ...

Hello there Tiger! Dogs here with your review. Well to start welcome back to YWS, I'm glad you posted something again. Ok, well as requested I'll cut to the chase ...

"Events... there were events I am sure I witnessed. These are unmistakeable." Hello there Loller! Dogs here with your review, I think you have an excellent first sentence, my only ...

"it's my home place" I think you should replace "Place" with a different word just to try to depict the the sacred place of the imagination. Maybe try palace or ...

Hello there Nmk! Dogs here with your review. Firstly, if I may say, Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, if you ever need anything, a review ...

Hey there Sarah! Dogs here with your review. You did a really good job of making the reader's skin crawl with this piece. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, most the ...

hello there Magpie! Tucker here with your review as requested. Really I think this is a just darn right excellent piece of work. You have great imagery, amazing vocab choice, ...