disheartedallure22

Greetings! I really really love what you have written here. You got one paragraph describing how the girl feels and then another about the boy. I really enjoyed that. The ...

Thank you for the review! I don't mind changing the "have" to "has" but H2O is written because I'm a scienctific person. So I don't know if I want to ...

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you interpreted the right things about this poem. The sarcasm was completely intentional, I was kind of worried that people wouldn't be able ...

Thank you for reviewing this. It means a lot to me. It's a little personal and a little fiction but the story is that the guy found another girl, not ...

You're welcome! :)

I just edited some part of the poem. Added some words, removed some. I didnt feel like removing or adding too much since I like that this poem just happened ...

Thanks, I almost made another one that night but I wanted to go back to sleep! and OH! Well at first I didn't really plan five lines, it just happened ...

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This poem just flowed out of me. to be honest with you, i didnt even think about these words coming out. Some of them i did but most of them ...

Thank you, Jack! Why was it sad? aww it was supposed to make you cry!

I've posted the poem! Hours ago but you should still check it out and tell me what your thoughts are on it!

Well thanks for the review! This was really just a random poem I wrote at 5am and mind was trying create another part to it but I kept denying it ...

hello! I like this poem! The title really got me interested in reading it so I did and It's really well written so good job! Keep up the good work! ...

this is a nice little poem! I like it! I especially like the last two lines. It's so true and complete. I like the alliteration with "every" keep on writing! ...

this is a nice little poem! I like it! I especially like the last two lines. It's so true and complete. I like the alliteration with "every" keep on writing! ...