dikxita

Hey there. First of all good job. Secondly, somethng in your literary piece really amused me- the rhythmic words. But I wish there would also had been some rhythm in ...

All was good but I still go back to your first line, which confuses me. The comparisons with the snow was interesting. But do let me know why did the ...

I began reading poetry with an illusion that it would contain something rather usual. But you surprised me all totally as I went through the last few lines. Keep up ...

beautiful really....but you know how good it would look with the lines specified individually...but anyways it is nice...good job