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First off, ill start with the finish :P I liked it, nice and abrubt and sinisterally thought out :D Ive skipped over your first chapter as I had seen that ...

heya, read a few of your chapters for this novel. Looks like it has potential. I think youve dragged out your characters imprisonment for a bit to long though, however, ...

I never nitpick, im sorry, I leave others to do that. I usually only comment if I like a story, and this is no exception. The post apocalyptic concept you ...

I very much enjoy peoples various renditions of "the apocalypse" and this was no exception. Overall I thought it was written very well, for a short story atleast.. The main ...

This was a very good and intresting read. Put a good sci-fi spin on a almost war like story. I like the narrative you get into. Unfortunatly there is not ...

Sup bro. Was an alright story but lacked real originality. The ending is quite abrubt and leaves me with a feeling that there should be more. I like the idea ...

This was an awesome story! Very intresting idea and told brilliantly. Sometimes the ingredients going into the mixtures can get a bit tiring, perhaps you could try and squeeze some ...

When you write it’s hard to realize; The reader’s not inside your head. They don’t know what you know. All they have is what they’ve read. It’s hard to make ...