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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Just Be

    Thank you!!

    Nov 22, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Just Be

    Thank you!! I agree with you on the last line. I wrote this poem a while ago and still can't figure out a way to end it. Honestly, I really ...

    Nov 21, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Just Be

    Thanks so much!

    Nov 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Bewildered

    Haha sorry about that, my computer glitched out and I couldn't delete the extra replies. I'm so glad I'm not the only young writer who loves Shakespeare- my friends think ...

    Nov 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Bewildered

    Hey! So I just wanted to let you know that I really love this poem. The problem I have with my writing is finding a way to word my message ...

    Nov 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Bewildered

    Hey! So I just wanted to let you know that I really love this poem. The problem I have with my writing is finding a way to word my message ...

    Nov 20, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The End of Us

    Thanks!! Happy writing to you as well :)

    Nov 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Stardust and Broken Dreams

    Hey! I have to say I really love and can relate to this poem. In the first line of the first stanza, I would suggest omitting the word "then". I ...

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Stardust and Broken Dreams

    Hey! I have to say I really love and can relate to this poem. In the first line of the first stanza, I would suggest omitting the word "then". I ...

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: R.I.P (We all fall sometimes)

    Honestly, this poem almost brought me to tears. Just through your words I could feel the love you had for your grandfather, and it's beautiful to read. I absolutely love ...

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The End of Us

    Aww well I'm glad to hear you're happy. In my case, after I wrote the story, my boyfriend and I ended up getting back together after a lot of hard ...

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The End of Us

    Thanks for the advice.

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The End of Us

    Thank you so much!!

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The End of Us

    Thanks for your comments! This actually did happen to me and it was a really difficult experience. I'm sorry you had to go through something similar :( I hope you're ...

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The End of Us

    Thank you so much!! I actually have a continuation of the story that I haven't posted on here yet since I didn't finish it completely. If you're interested I can ...

    Nov 17, 2015


I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy