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Re: Bewildered
Hey! So I just wanted to let you know that I really love this poem. The problem I have with my writing is finding a way to word my message ...
Nov 20, 2015 -
Re: Every Detail
Hey ChocolateCello! First of all, I just wanted to say this poem brought tears to my eyes. The first three stanzas were sweet, and I liked how you referred the ...
Nov 18, 2015 -
Re: Stardust and Broken Dreams
Hey! I have to say I really love and can relate to this poem. In the first line of the first stanza, I would suggest omitting the word "then". I ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: R.I.P (We all fall sometimes)
Honestly, this poem almost brought me to tears. Just through your words I could feel the love you had for your grandfather, and it's beautiful to read. I absolutely love ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: On and On
Hey Sagitta, so before I critique a few things, I just wanted to say that this was very well written and I applaud you for having the courage to write ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: Breakable
I really love how you portrayed the future as an object here. It almost reminds me of a fortune teller's glass ball that they look into to see the future. ...
Nov 16, 2015