delmarria

Honestly, at first I thought it was a sad poem, until the very end. Maybe you want to keep the happy ending, but it would have been much more touching ...

This poem made me want to cry...its emotion is overwhelming. You didn't show me his cuts on your back, But I saw them when I made love to you. You ...

I honestly have no idea where you're going with this teenage rebel (I honestly don't like him), but I want to help, so here I am. :D Comments/suggestions/corrections are in ...

All right. I liked your story "much much much" but then the whole rape thing...kind of ruined it for me. I hope the rest of your novel isn't full of ...

Hey First of all, this poem is...well, emotionally wrenching. I just hope that my relationship with my mom never changes... Here are some corrections/comments/suggestions I am now free Now yours ...

Hi! Honestly, when I first clicked on this, I thought I would see some poem expounding on how awesome Christmas is, lalala (no offense taken, I hope). I was pleasantly ...

Hi! This was a really good short story, and I really liked reading it (a cool and spooy interpretation of what WW3 might look like...). The other reviewers already found ...

This is really funny, and my guess is you're trying to make fun of the Middle Ages (duh...) :D Here are all the corrections and comments (in red text) I ...

Oh my...this is really beautiful. I don't know what else to say. The imagery is nice, and it gives the whole poem a feeling of mystery and love. My favorite ...

Hi! I really like the poem...I saw the same things that the previous reviewer mentioned, so you should correct those. I also really like that the poem kind of has ...

Hey! No spelling mistakes found, so good job on that score! As for the actual poem... I'm sorry, maybe I'm wrong, but I don't really think you're right there. The ...

Oh I loved this! Like the above reviewer said, it's sort of serious and funny at the same time. It's a little one-sided though, and if you want this to ...