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Hey there fellow Glow Cloud member! So this sounds really interesting! I wish I had the same class as you so I could have watched this movie! I've always wanted ...

Hi! To start off, this is really good! You really open up your thoughts to the reader, and even though I had no idea who you were before reading this, ...

Hey there! Since Reivew Day has started, I'll get to this review, woo! So this is absolutely brilliant, like always. The expansion of Alexander feeling so down about being a ...

Hi! I really like this! Hands are pretty interesting, at least to me, so I really enjoyed reading your take on them! I love that you don't have much punctuation ...

So this is absolutely amazing, but I'm glad this doesn't really relate to your life right now, since that's pretty sad. To start off, I really like the beginning lines, ...

Hey! This chapter was amazing! I didn't really find any mistakes at all in this, so good job on that. Good characters are so diverse and interesting and ugh this ...

Hi there! This is absolutely amazing. You have a brilliant way with words and wow this completely blew me away. You have a lot of punctuation in this, which is ...

Hey there! So I really like this first chunk of your story. Your characters are pretty realistic which I appreciate a lot, and this overall seems pretty interesting. Your narrator ...

Hello there! To start off, I'm a huge fan of Sherlock so this definitely caught my eye! I do however have a couple questions about this. First off, there's never ...

To start off, I think that you should put a warning on this, just because of how blunt the first line is. No one needs to scar the younger kids ...

Wow dude. This again broke my heart! I think I'll start with some advice I have for you since I didn't give you many specifics last review, I might as ...

Wow. This is really good! Your rhyming is really well done, and your theme is nicely developed in this. I like the first person view in this, rather than any ...

Hey there! This is really good, but I have a couple of things I want to touch up on. First off, I think you typoed in the last line of ...

Wow. This was very interesting. That's a really unique storybook you got there! I appreciate that you put this in alphabetical order - so many lists and guides nowadays are ...

Hey there! Alright I like the ideas you have here a lot; the beginning of a cute high school romance is pretty relatable to most, and I like how the ...