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I can't believe it's the end. I never wanted this story to be over, ahh! Your character development has made me feel so invested with Alexander and Evie and the ...

Dang. You love twisting my heart around with feels, huh? This chapter was definitely worth it to read through, 8000+ words and all ~ I can't say how much I ...

I've been looking at this and a couple of your other poems, but I'm not quite sure what to tell you; your style of writing is most certainly unique, but ...

Here I am from the request thread, so I hope this review helps! First off, Malala is such an inspiring person and kudos to her and all of her hardships ...

Hey there! I don't even know how to review these anymore - your writing is so good! I never want this story to end! This world of yours is so ...

Hey there! This reminds me of Maximum Ride - except I already like Toby a lot more than Max or Angel. I also like the idea of a race of ...

Hi there! So, to start off, I like that you have this formatted, but I don't really like the actual format, sorry. When the emphasized word was a verb, it ...

So this kind of cracked me up. I love satire so much *coughcough A Modest Proposal coughcough* but not enough people write it, so thank you for creating this. Can ...

So this seems pretty interesting. I just looked up FTL, and it reminds me somewhat of Star Wars, which isn't a bad thing, at least to me. You developed the ...

Ah! I'm so sorry for not reviewing this sooner! I still absolutely loved this chapter - and I may have reread it five times - but I wasn't sure how ...

Hey! I love historical fiction, so this was definitely interesting to read! First off, I'd suggest you cut the very first paragraph into a couple of separate ones, just to ...

Hey there! So this is really interesting. Your ideas are explained well, and you did a good job overall linking this whole essay together, so good job on that. I ...

Hey there! I've been reading really sad stories lately, but this was exactly what I needed to lighten my mood, so thank you. This was so cute! Yes, there's some ...

Well hello there. I might have sobbed aloud for a few minutes before even attempting this review. I can't even - you tore my heart into pieces and blended them ...

Hey there! This was really interesting to read; your use of very strong vocabulary added a lot of impact on this piece, even if it's pretty short. I can really ...