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Christopher Pike an amazing writer, he keeps me reading, also I chose the best ones. Remember Me saga was brill and the twist in The Chainletter book 2 was so ...

This is really a good story, I could imagine it in a collection of short stories. I'm just suggesting, decribe some of it too, it bit too fast, take your ...

Montmorency - Elenour Updale. This book is one of the best I've ever read, It deserves to be here.

This is a really an amazing poem. I loved how it appeared the student was much smarter than the teacher. Also I agree with ofour be better if the teacher ...

Okay... poetry has punuaction and capital letters. It's harder to read a poem without punuaction look at other poems and you'll see punuaction. :)

Yeh, DD right it's mostly question but lack of puntuaction bothers me. Despite what people say poetry does need puntuaction. Anyway put puntuaction get rid of emoticon and got a ...

What about Of Mice and Men - John Steinbeck, Tom Sawyer - Mark Twain, Peter Pan(Forgot author name) That's all I can think of... hold on Arabian Nights( I don't ...

God it's not alot you see poems like this so good. This is one of the best poems i ever seen and I throughly agree with it. One thing ya ...

One bit of advice I can think of is maybe to split it up into stanzas, so it's much easier to read. It's nice and full of compassion. Would prefer ...

Only error i noticed in this was you said "to" instead of "too" alot. Other than that a great poem and very much enjoyed it. Like how he gets his ...

Okay erm about the meal the Crystal Glasses were a wedding gift and that meal was a well done for Tea and Alexzander. Also you will see.

Hey one thing Grif you forgot Dono other persona Quiz lmao. But great so far can't wait to read more.

Hehe I can't decide I like blog one better lmao. Hmm well chocolate seemed to pointed it out. Great poem though as always.

Ofour about his name Alexzander is his name. Okay also I know about grammar, but it took so long showing people in chat room. So put it on. Remember it ...

It kinda peaceful yet morbid in a way. I pointed out only thing that seemed to jump out on messenger. But I'm no expert let Brad view it and well ...