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Yeah i thought what the hey may as well

That is very good i wish their was a way you could put on these tunes because you are a great writer of Lyrics

Cool your quite good you know that

cool i do that except i draw cartoon zombies and that on my jotter oh also i like drawing eyes.BUt apart from that good

Good point

That is brillant but using the name middle earth was to LOTR and the Hobbit but apart from that very good

I know but u see this is the tranformation taking effect and he getting the were wolf strengh very quickly anyway his Step Dad is just shocked so he tries ...

Very cool carry on plz carry on

Thanks right here it goes. Max was a brave boy he had black spiky hair and blue eyes and a strong build but the real reason why Max was brave ...

One conclusion u like writing songs oh well.Very good it very good but wat it about i am totally confused but good

Very good very good more must read more

Thanks right here it goes. Max was a brave boy he had black spiky hair and blue eyes and a strong build but the real reason why Max was brave ...

Brillant wat i like about it is he is basically a normal kid but then he makes a deal with a vampire.I read 3 i thought they were very good ...

bit too much swearing i know wat u are trying to get but swearing does not help it

sorry sorry sorry it was only at the last minute i realized i had decided to kill Edward son it was in 1st then 3rd person and soz i am ...