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Haha! Thanks for the feedback Matt! Please feel free to drop by my blog at any point (it's in my signature) :-) Yes the vicious circle of experience! I wonder ...

Why thank you! :- Yes I do know that job hunting is not a job haha! However, I was trying to express the fact that it feels like a job ...

Skins, with the cellphone conversation, remember this is a scene happening on stage. the other side of the conversation can't be heard. there are methods of doing this such as ...

thanks for that Skins! I'm sorry, I should have shown you the previous scenes first! here they are if you get the chance: ...Aut Mortatis Conans: Scene 1 & 2 ...

OK I agree with you about the language. I think this can be fixed with a bit more character development. I will see what I can do about giving the ...

I was equally as clueless about "hussy"... I'm not the best at deciding age ratings I'm afraid... except for the obvious extremes! And I don't really write a lot of ...

OK I'll think of a way to make the transition of years smoother. At this point she is well over 18 years old, and has settled in well in her ...

Tanya, this play was written for a festival, so I had strict time restrictions for the performance. Thus any transitional scenes just had to go. But I will think about ...

wow, yay! number 200!! :-D :elephant: OK about the "auntie" bit, maybe it didn't come through clearly in the text, but Vivica had always demanded to be called this by ...

Thanks for the review! The answer to your question is....Both! I wrote it and acted in it. I'll fix the caps thing! My aim wasn't to make her realistic - ...

Thanks a lot Navita! OK, I will try to answer your questions as best I can. With the bees, I wanted to express the contrast between all the elements of ...

thanks for the review Amie! its actually a very recent experience, and i wrote it while i was quite emotional. and you're right, it is very honest. i rarely write ...

Your writing talent seems to have resurrected in this piece! (see what i did there?) I can completely relate, as i feel that writing is so a part of me, ...

wow Shaard thanks! :'-) i really appreciate the appreciation, and i dont wanna hound you, but could you give more specific details about what you liked? and anything you didnt ...

Thanks Ranger Hawk! Apologies for my rudeness, it does make total sense to review others work first. I'm getting on that immediately! I'll check out your entries too :smt002 I'm ...